Would one of our Australian residents be interested in taking a look at 1 or 2 pages of dialogue to make sure I strung various words and phrases together properly? It's a small scene in a screenplay I've been working on, and I'd hate to submit something (not quite there yet) that someone would recognize as hackneyed.
It's actually more like half a page of dialogue (4-5 lines) spread over a page or two. Pretty minimal.
Thanks in advance!